The Mark Blog

Bookmark This: Janet Fitch's Ten Rules For Writers

Janet Fitch, author of White Oleander and Paint It Black, is known as an incredibly generous writing teacher, and for that reason she's shared ten universal writing tips that are drawn from her own experiences. Janet Fitch also regularly donates her time as an author evening host for the Emerging Voices Fellowship.

Below are some of her thoughtful pointers. You can read the rest of them in LA Times Jacket Copy or on her blog.

1. Write the sentence, not just the story
Long ago I got a rejection from the editor of the Santa Monica Review, Jim Krusoe. It said: “Good enough story, but what’s unique about your sentences?” That was the best advice I ever got. Learn to look at your sentences, play with them, make sure there’s music, lots of edges and corners to the sounds. Read your work aloud. Read poetry aloud and try to heighten in every way your sensitivity to the sound and rhythm and shape of sentences. The music of words. I like Dylan Thomas best for this–the Ballad of the Long-Legged Bait. I also like Sexton, Eliot, and Brodsky for the poets and Durrell and Les Plesko for prose. A terrific exercise is to take a paragraph of someone’s writing who has a really strong style, and using their structure, substitute your own words for theirs, and see how they achieved their effects.

...

5. Explore sentences using dependent clauses.
A dependent clause (a sentence fragment set off by commas, dontcha know) helps you explore your story by moving you deeper into the sentence. It allows you to stop and think harder about what you’ve already written. Often the story you’re looking for is inside the sentence. The dependent clause helps you uncover it.

...

7. Smarten up your protagonist.
Your protagonist is your reader’s portal into the story. The more observant he or she can be, the more vivid will be the world you’re creating. They don’t have to be super-educated, they just have to be mentally active. Keep them looking, thinking, wondering, remembering.

burberry outlet online

check burberry outlet xtDgyuFK [URL=http://www.burberryoutlet-online2013.org/ - burberry outlet[/URL - online shopping EAksJMvc http://www.burberryoutlet-online2013.org/

burberry raincoat

for cheap burberry ZzgpEWLf [URL=http://www.burberryoutlet-online2013.org/ - burberry outlet[/URL - online UDUjutRn http://www.burberryoutlet-online2013.org/

fake chanel bags

you love this? fake chanel online shopping UkcTmOkm http://www.socialimba.com/fakechanelbags/

It doesn't automatically mean

It doesn't automatically mean that once you have a self defence weapon with you, you are already safe. Never underestimate the capability Military Swords of crooks just because you have a pepper spray in your pocket.

Post new comment

The content of this field is kept private and will not be shown publicly.
  • Web page addresses and e-mail addresses turn into links automatically.
  • Allowed HTML tags: <a> <em> <strong> <cite> <code> <ul> <ol> <li> <dl> <dt> <dd>
  • Lines and paragraphs break automatically.

More information about formatting options

By submitting this form, you accept the Mollom privacy policy.